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My Scariest Moment in Ghana

I sat bolt upright in bed, heart thumping, breath gasping, straining to see into the darkness in the direction of the voice.

Had it just been a bad dream? It had been such a terrifying phrase! I listened again, shaking.

Silence… Heat… The whirl of the ceiling fan…

And then suddenly, there it was again: a horrid, deep, rasp right outside my window. “I AM COMING FOR YOU,” it hissed.

I would have sobbed in anguish if I hadn’t been so terrified. My mind raced through the security features of the guesthouse. There were bars on the windows and my doors were locked. My friends were sleeping just a few doors away. And yet– a robber that determined might not be deterred by such things.

“I AM COMING FOR YOU,” hissed the voice again, hoarse and threatening.

I nearly jumped out of my skin. Was the voice coming from INSIDE my room? Where should I run to? What would I do? I felt dizzy with nausea.

“I AM COMING FOR YOU!” the voice rasped again: phlegmy and ghoulish like a poltergeist. I began hyperventilating.

Right as I was about to faint from terror, the beast outside gave a good cough to clear its throat, then spoke again.

“Cockadoodledoooooo!” it sang.

I let out a guffaw of relief and shooed the laryngitis-inflicted rooster away from my window. Who’d have thought that a congested bird could sound just like an evil robber?? Now you know.

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Jawahir M.

Wednesday 18th of November 2015

As I was reading this, I had chills!! Great story to share!

Emma E

Tuesday 17th of November 2015

Wow! I probably would have screamed so loud it would go away!

Nikki O.

Tuesday 17th of November 2015

Wow this seemed so scary at first, but it turns it was just a rooster. How did it sound like it was saying "I'm coming to get you"?

Brianna C.

Tuesday 17th of November 2015

That is so scary! I would have ran away!!!! You're such a good writer, I mean, that could be a bestseller! Wow, I can't believe it was a rooster! All this time it repeated itself, you would think it was a human. Cool story! I'm a boring person, so nothing ever happens to me.

Lily M.

Tuesday 17th of November 2015

I would've been SO scared! I'd wake up in the middle of the night and here that outside my door! I never would've guessed it was a rooster! It sounded like the writing in a Goosebumps book!

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